![]() ![]() Nikki is a teen girl who just came back from the dead. ![]() “Where’s your family?” chap 9, as a writing example Plot recap I thought it was Bach, but I wasn’t sure. ![]() He sighed, then grabbed his guitar and picked out a classical melody. “It’s everything I allowed myself to hope for,” I qualified. “Is it everything you hoped it would be?” Cole said. Now that I was prepared for the pull between us, it was easier to ignore it, but it never went away. I nodded and flipped through my notebook on top of my desk, trying to fight the urge to go sit next to him. I wondered if the Shade inside me could feel the presence of an Everliving.Ĭole couldn’t know I thought about any of this. ![]() The scar on my shoulder began to prickle, as if it were waking up. Already my mind is deleting it and I read it over the course of less than twenty four hours. So you can witness the bad writing, and… uh… normally I’d make some joking reference to an insane thing in this book, but there isn’t much of anything. It’s one of those books I think I’ll have little to say, even though I’ve (finally) started highlighting excerpts to help make my reviews more fun. Much like the bad boy ‘love interest’, Everneath is lifeless and devoid of personality. It is sort of like a bad writer’s idea of middle grade fiction in terms of writing quality yet composed of YA tropes from the era. It might as well have been assembled by an AI and then edited down into simple, technically cohesive sentences. What I’m trying to imply is that Everneath is generic. ![]()
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